here is my final version had to cut it down for length
Dear Nick and Mike,
While I fully respect [strike]you[/strike]your decision to be a victim, you and those who think like you should not be allowed to force it on the rest of the population. In your letter you call any one who carries a gun for self defense a [strike]vigilant[/strike]vigilante and someone who would do more harm than good. I can give you a case THIS VERY WEEK where an armed citizen stopped crime and saved lives in Indiana (Man Rescues Two Women from Captor) (include citation). Statistically, people who have a license to carry a gun are the safest and most law-abiding people in the country. Florida has issued more carry permits than any state (1.5 million). Only 166 (0.01 percent) have been revoked due to gun crimes by permit-holders. I would also like to point out that while police officers are trained to use weapons, it does not make them more proficient than other gun owners. It is a great responsibility to carry a gun, and just because you think that you wouldn’t be able to control YOURSELF if you had a gun, which is evident by what you think would happen, doesn’t mean I, or any other person, couldn’t. Also, this is NOT a theoretical attack-evident from recent events in Alabama and Virginia Tech. In Indiana, roughly 10% of the population has a [strike]permit[/strike]license to carry. That means one of every ten people could have a self defense weapon. When was the last time you got shot at while in Walmart? What makes the classroom different than anywhere else? Why should I have to check my CONSTITUTIONAL RIGHTS at the door to make you ‘feel’ safer, when in reality my right to carry MAKES you safer?
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