The Road Home

[NathanJefferson]

www.abundantfuture.net

 

[NathanJefferson]

It all looks so small on here :-p. Kinda disheartening. But its 80 pages in word on size 11 font, not too bad .

I think it's about half finished as far as the outline goes, then it's time to go back and revise/edit/add, so if there are any things you like or don't like let me know! I want the story to be realistic(ish) and enjoyable!

And don't worry, there will be a bit more action/drama coming up instead of all the boring stuff.

 

[Lucas156]

Awesome just read it all! More to come I hope

 

[NathanJefferson]

www.abundantfuture.net

 

[9mmfan]

Nice job. Keep it coming

 

[NathanJefferson]

www.abundantfuture.net

 

[pitbulld45]

Awesome story.

 

[NathanJefferson]

Working on the next few sections, sorry I've been getting a little behind! Been spending extra time with the baby and then any free time has been reloading some brass now that I've got my dies all fixed and squared away.

 

[flagtag]

I appreciate whatever you can give us. Great story!!

 

[NathanJefferson]

www.abundantfuture.net

 

[pitbulld45]

Great story. I always look forward to the next piece. Thanks.

 

[NathanJefferson]

15 queries, so far one returned undeliverable, 2 rejections. 12 more 'floating' out there. Hmmmmm. I guess I need to hurry up and finish this thing so i can start polishing it for someone worthy... :-p

 

[easy]

Would it be possible for you to change the font? It's a bit small to read comfortably.

 

[ViperJock]

Good luck!

 

[SouthernIndy]

Thanks for the story.

 

[toddk]

Lookin good man. So when he gets to indiana is he going to go through any towns that we may know? How about a guest appearance by a lucky forum member?

Keep going with it!

 

[NathanJefferson]

www.abundantfuture.net

 

[NathanJefferson]

www.abundantfuture.net

 

[Lucas156]

Stop what??? On the edge of my seat here

 

[NathanJefferson]

just a massive riot and unrest when the last 1000's of people got left out with nothing... :-P

Didn't originally plan on writing more about it but I do see that I didn't put enough in to solidify the path.